Another Bupkus poem

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Another Bupkus poem Jan 27, 2009 16:40:51 GMT -5 rochellenorlund likes this

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Post by magnet on Jan 27, 2009 16:40:51 GMT -5

I almost forgot about this one, but I found it. Here it is.

Big bright blur

Passes before my eyes

Makes my throat numb

Shoes pounding the floor

Loud as my heart

No, louder

The crowd cheers

Goes wild mad

Strong legs pump

Up and down

Making my throat tight

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Veggirl Administrator Posts: 124	Another Bupkus poem Jan 27, 2009 22:40:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Veggirl on Jan 27, 2009 22:40:30 GMT -5 I like this, very nice flow.

magnet Full Member <3 Posts: 196	Another Bupkus poem Jan 27, 2009 23:07:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by magnet on Jan 27, 2009 23:07:42 GMT -5 Thanks. It's rather simple, but I'm not good at poetry, lol.
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bupkuslover27 Full Member Posts: 173	Another Bupkus poem Jan 28, 2009 20:58:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bupkuslover27 on Jan 28, 2009 20:58:03 GMT -5 Ooooh..Me Likes Nice Job My Friend!
	Is a Bupkus lover and proud. <3 Bupkus X Bubbles 4-Ever!

magnet Full Member <3 Posts: 196	Another Bupkus poem Jan 28, 2009 21:46:36 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by magnet on Jan 28, 2009 21:46:36 GMT -5 Thanks so much, bupkuslover! =) I'm glad you like it.
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Post by magnet on Jan 28, 2009 21:46:36 GMT -5